life was meant.
to harness,to flow
our opinion is what we make it
and without us there would be no
and without our Creator there would be no us.
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i love the poem, i agree with the pov but i dont like the word "it" at the end of the fourth lign... maybe u should spice it up with a juicey adjective or put a noun in there. But the poem is great
keep writing=)happy reading(=
The essence here is great
I'm not a fan of your structure but you managed to fit it all in. I found it a little short though, perhaps more on this topic mixed with a little variety between the three last lines 
The flow is alright, but not tremendous. I'd recommend leaving the "and" out in the last two stanza's, cuts off the tacky
Cheerios, Chandni
Very good at making the mind think, a great skill to do.
Moved from Storybooks to Poetry